Friday, 7 August 2020

The Discovery


Excited, the children disembarked the bus. It was a cold and foggy day  and the children   were shivering so there  but on  the coast and scarves to keep them warm.they  are  waiting for the teacher to come and The children walked up the skeleton Bravely and the children was think why is the skeleton.they look around the skeleton to see if it a dragon or a dinosaur.
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2 comments:

  1. Anonymous23 August 2020 at 11:00

    Hi Waniya, thank you for sharing your brilliant story with us on your blog! I was really excited to read it when I first read the sentence "Excited, the children disembarked the bus." Disembarked is a terrific word to be in a story by a nice author! Great work Waniya!

    Blog you later!
    Alofa

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  2. Anonymous14 September 2020 at 09:15

    Kia ora Waniya,
    Great story!
    You could make the story longer.
    But anyways this reminds me when i did this story writing thing, but i don't think i finished it.
    Great job but... here is my BLOG!
    Stay safe,
    Bye!

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